After receiving feedback from Dan on our rough cut, he made us understand our footage doesn't really have a purpose and only shows a boy walking without a clear introduction of him. After watching the footage again, I believe Dan has a point so therefore my group and I have decided to add our original idea back to the footage. Our original idea involves the character Marcus's mother shouting at him which causes him to leave the house in anger. Also, a new idea we have thought is a voice over of the character Marcus so it gives the audience an insight of his personality and lifestyle.
We also received feedback from Daniel (group 34) who mentioned our scenes are too long, I agree with this and suggested we cut of the cigarette scene. I've chosen this particular scene because the cigarette packet isn't really visible and you can't see the interaction between the shopkeeper and Marcus, also the shot was a bit shaky. Daniel also mentioned he didn't understand the relationship between the character Marcus and Elijah - this will be established through the voice over of Marcus.
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