Dan said that our footage is meaningless as it does not make sense and is so long. We decided to follow up an idea that we initially thought of but didn't go along with - We are going to add a voice over of Marcus's mother telling him off so that viewers understand that Marcus left the house because he was annoyed with his mother.
We also want to add a voice narration while Marcus is walking so that the viewers get told a story of what they are watching about, as just watching a boy walking can be very tedious.
A member of our class, Daniel from Group 34 also gave feedback about our film - He too said that our footage drags on and to remove the scene where Marcus buys a cigarette as it is very ambiguous and the viewers can't really tell whats in his hand. He also said that he did not understand what was going on between Marcus and Elijah, therefore we decided to add on a narrative voice to dictate the story.
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