Daniel from group 34:
He mentioned that the title of the film was really nice and the film was good overall. However, there were many improvements he suggested we do such as:
- Shorten some of the shots as they drag on too much
- Increase the pace of the editing so it looks better
- He wasn't sure why the last scene took place and doesn't understand what is going on between the two boys.
- He didn't like the fact that the music wasn't playing.
We have decided to cut off some scenes - the scene we have chosen is when the character goes inside the shop to buy a cigarette packet, this is because we don't think it's necessary and doesn't really go with the plot of the film. Also, we cut down the parts when he was walking as we thought it was too much.
Also, the reason the music wasn't playing is because we're still working on it because of the feedback we got from Dan last time.
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